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First attempt at a Haiku

Discarded old car Star on Grill Still a Mercedes

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Date: 12/16/2012 10:46:00 AM

this is awesome, and since I adore haiku, my project with you today is read all your haiku on your page three!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2012 12:47:00 PM

Thanks, early attempt, I now realize form is incorrect, I still like this one though.

Date: 10/28/2012 8:18:00 AM

Fun to write Haiku poems - enjoy your Richard, well done. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / huggs .... Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/28/2012 9:09:00 AM

Thanks Anne. Hugs back to you.

Date: 10/28/2012 7:37:00 AM

Nice haiku. Brought a smile to my face.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/28/2012 7:40:00 AM

Thanks, never wrote one before so wasn't sure if I got it right.

Date: 10/28/2012 6:20:00 AM

I like your writings Richard! Happy you have joined us... have a great day! Jack

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/28/2012 7:41:00 AM

I appreciate tha Jack as well as your extended hand of friendship. I also enjoy your whimsical style of writing.

Date: 10/27/2012 9:32:00 PM

Richard, an excellent image and car...xox..LINDA

Date: 10/27/2012 6:03:00 PM

An interesting poem, old car, still identifiable. I wonder if poeple should come with stars.