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Line of Fire

I would rather be smoke than ash ***

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/18/2018 8:32:00 AM

Maureen, you have fiery red hair and there must be a lot of smoke in the air around you. Yes, ash is far less difficult to appreciate. We normally dispose of ashes by some method or another. Very amusing you are.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/19/2018 7:49:00 AM

Duke! I've missed you :) thank you! xomo

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/16/2018 11:53:00 AM

Love Andrea's comment, "A classic" Mo! Another gem from your pocket of poseys! OKAY seems like I'm FINALLY getting a glimpse of my real Mo... STUNNING, MYSTERIOUS, INTRIGUING!!!!!!! Love and hugs, Happy Jack XOX

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/19/2018 7:49:00 AM

<3 <3 <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2018 8:10:00 PM

Awesome one-liner!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/16/2018 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! :)) xomo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/15/2018 5:51:00 PM

A classic Mo! Another gem from your pocket of poseys! : )

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/16/2018 7:22:00 AM

Giggles, I s'pose it is. Thank you! :))) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/15/2018 10:36:00 AM

Witty, dearest Maureen! ...the smoke can be seen from afar and reaches the clouds...! Smiles!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/16/2018 7:21:00 AM

Ooh I love that <3 Thank you my sweet D! xomo

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/15/2018 6:09:00 AM

Smoking! write Mo...love & light...^WW^

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/15/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Wing'ed One ;) xomo

Bernard Chan

Date: 11/14/2018 11:40:00 PM

Touche.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/15/2018 8:17:00 AM

;) xomo!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/14/2018 10:22:00 AM

You are the embers that keep the fires warm

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/14/2018 5:33:00 PM

smooches

Chris Green

Date: 11/14/2018 8:25:00 AM

Smoke floats freely on the wind discovering new places, ash just lays there and looks old and grey. I can understand why you would choose smoke. :) Nice one my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/14/2018 8:40:00 AM

A smile :) good morning Chris! Thank you <3 xomo