Line and Verse

In sparse words
the poet writes
choosing power
over fluff.

The perfect line
and word
and length
inked on the page.

The poet’s bow
pulled back
taut with arrow set
then flies

to strike a heart
if lucky
if exact
a breath gasped

a pause created
for the words
to step into
and change a life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Beaufort Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 5:57 PM
Fran, writing on creating poetry and our motivation is always very interesting. We do hope our words can reach out and help others see things we see and feel. Very well done!
Situation Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:41 PM
Thanks for avoiding word salads. simplicity has its rewards.
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