Linda-Marie Bariana

To my sweetheart Linda-Marie Bariana
Hawaii’s lovely to go and I really wanna
We can make love under a date tree
Which is pleasing to me
Sipping on a Malibu with a banana
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 9, 2010 at 12:42 PM
nice, you see you are nothing but a nice guy,,happily is the right word,, just like my p.d. name means really the oposite,,, i'm sending you soup mail,, on the comments again,,,..p.d.
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July 3, 2010 at 4:41 PM
What a sweet write about a charming and sweet lady. Fabulous job!
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July 3, 2010 at 1:55 PM
Very good line Sidney , but I don't believe date trees are indiginous to Hawaii,but neither Captain Cooks nor me ! Respects to Linda-Marie
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