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Linda-Marie Bariana

To my sweetheart Linda-Marie Bariana Hawaii’s lovely to go and I really wanna We can make love under a date tree Which is pleasing to me Sipping on a Malibu with a banana

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Date: 10/9/2010 12:42:00 PM
nice, you see you are nothing but a nice guy,,happily is the right word,, just like my p.d. name means really the oposite,,, i'm sending you soup mail,, on the comments again,,,..p.d.
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:41:00 PM
What a sweet write about a charming and sweet lady. Fabulous job!
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Date: 7/3/2010 1:55:00 PM
Very good line Sidney , but I don't believe date trees are indiginous to Hawaii,but neither Captain Cooks nor me ! Respects to Linda-Marie
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