Limits

I'm limitless I can say this because the possibilities are infinite But whoever said you can be anything you want Is a liar The truth is You can become anything you work for Strive for, dedicate your blood, sweat and time for The only limit is where you see the top I believe trees are living testimonies to the idea of limits They grow reaching towards the heavens While staying grounded knowing where their roots lay If trees were people they would walk confidently Never fearing to trip on a show lace When confronted with the world at my feet The highest point I can imagine at my head I think a little higher I smile a little brighter Because the possibilities are endless I'm limitless August 2, 2015 Joshua Beverly

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Skat A

Date: 8/23/2015 12:30:00 AM

Joshua, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2015 12:29:00 AM

Hi Joshua, I have a question for you, after reading your comment on the bottom. How did you stumble upon this site? I love how you join this site, entering a contest, it took me 2 years before I even considered a contest. I never felt good enough. My talent is small. Anyways, your poem above is perfect for this contest. I especially love how you end the poem, All possibilities have no end. By, the way I definitely see you smiling brighter. HUGS.. LINDA

Joshua Beverly
Date: 8/3/2015 12:37:00 AM

Hey Linda, I found the site because I was looking for a writers club or poetry group in my area where I can improve on my writing, after going through different sites I saw this and I stayed. It's great to have another friend! I hope to see your work as well! Thank you for the love you showed my poem *hugs back

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2015 12:29:00 AM

By the way, Joshua, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/2/2015 11:29:00 PM

Hi, Joshua, is this for the limit contest, if so... wishing you luck.... Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Joshua Beverly
Date: 8/2/2015 11:41:00 PM

Thank you for the kind message, I really do appreciate this and yes this is an entry for the contest. I have to admit I was hesitant to join Poetry Soup but I know the magic happens out of my comfort zone. I can express how cool it is that you left this comment thank you for being my first Poetry Soup friend *hugs back