Verliza Gajeles Poet Free verse

Limitless World

Cruise ship in the universe
Sailing across the cold space
Star ships floating into nowhere
And islands of galaxies glitters.
 
Colourful world of fantasy
Exposing lies and reality
Accepting truth with fear
Oh, please take me out here.
 
My golden suns are daffodils
Glowing glorious everywhere
The moon serves as my dear diary
Where I could tell my story.
 
Stars are my fireflies
As the night goes by
To the falling stars I blow a kiss
Just to send my only wish.

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Ovidiu Bocsa July 31, 2015 at 3:38 AM I liked very much...”golden sun are daffodils/Glowing glorious everywhere The moon serves as my dear diary...” A poetical atmosphere You breathe So I entered your orchard like a thief of apples and I found a golden peach. I feel so rich I might sometime reach To find its pair near the blond daffodils... Verliza Gajeles July 31, 2015 at 3:43 AM wow, you have a nice comments :) Since I'm new in the poetry world, I envy the lines you have. Great lines :) you really spoke like a poet :) you're a real poet :) Thank you for the great comments, Ovidiu ;) Smile always .. -//Verliza

Julia Ward July 31, 2015 at 2:46 AM A light as a feather poem, well achieved. Verliza Gajeles July 31, 2015 at 3:18 AM thank you julia for the nice comment :) -//Verliza

Eric Boddie July 31, 2015 at 12:44 AM here I go....lol....but really I Love the flow....of this Beautiful seen you describe....so many nights the stars have inspired me inside....Beautiful....;) Verliza Gajeles July 31, 2015 at 12:49 AM Thank you Eric for the nice comments :) I'm flattered that you like my poem.. Smile :) - //verliza