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Limitless World

Cruise ship in the universe Sailing across the cold space Star ships floating into nowhere And islands of galaxies glitters. Colourful world of fantasy Exposing lies and reality Accepting truth with fear Oh, please take me out here. My golden suns are daffodils Glowing glorious everywhere The moon serves as my dear diary Where I could tell my story. Stars are my fireflies As the night goes by To the falling stars I blow a kiss Just to send my only wish.

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/31/2015 3:38:00 AM

I liked very much...”golden sun are daffodils/Glowing glorious everywhere The moon serves as my dear diary...” A poetical atmosphere You breathe So I entered your orchard like a thief of apples and I found a golden peach. I feel so rich I might sometime reach To find its pair near the blond daffodils...

Verliza Gajeles
Date: 7/31/2015 3:43:00 AM

wow, you have a nice comments :) Since I'm new in the poetry world, I envy the lines you have. Great lines :) you really spoke like a poet :) you're a real poet :) Thank you for the great comments, Ovidiu ;) Smile always .. -//Verliza

Julia Ward

Date: 7/31/2015 2:46:00 AM

A light as a feather poem, well achieved.

Verliza Gajeles
Date: 7/31/2015 3:18:00 AM

thank you julia for the nice comment :) -//Verliza

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/31/2015 12:44:00 AM

here I go....lol....but really I Love the flow....of this Beautiful seen you describe....so many nights the stars have inspired me inside....Beautiful....;)

Verliza Gajeles
Date: 7/31/2015 12:49:00 AM

Thank you Eric for the nice comments :) I'm flattered that you like my poem.. Smile :) - //verliza