Limitless Love

As she walked thru limitless pain
Her body contorted and old
She ached for his divine grace
And freedom from binding chains
Her soul clearly broken
Into tiny glittering points
And dark night enticingly beckoned
To pass into limitless sky
And as day blurred into dusk
Her soul took its flight
Among the burning starry way
She at last found what she lacked
A limitless ocean of love and peace
That He held in his arms

03/05/2011

For Paula’s ‘Limitless’ contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/16/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Tahera. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 11:56:00 AM
Great discovery on one's part..Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2011 1:44:00 PM
Very good write and a great win for you..luv Michael
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Date: 5/10/2011 11:00:00 AM
Many congrats on your win : )
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:41:00 AM
this is a beauty, Tahera! What a wonderful poem of true limitless love! Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/10/2011 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tahera in Paula's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2011 5:32:00 AM
a true dream and so mote it be...congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/10/2011 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 5/10/2011 4:54:00 AM
Tahera ..dear friend.. sorry to hear of your surgery .. will pray for u always..luv.. did your winners list post as I cannot find it ?? I see the contest has been judged and thankxx for my first place with "Art of Perfection" .. but I cannot see the list to congratulate others ... if u can please help ... to see where it is ..thankxx luv and take care my friend.. so dear..
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Date: 5/10/2011 12:57:00 AM
unlimited praises for this shining glory piece, tahera.. congrats with huggs!
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Date: 5/9/2011 11:53:00 PM
Excellent. Congrats.
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Date: 5/9/2011 11:10:00 PM
Tahera, I love this poem...such a release for an older weary body. In the 3rd line, did u want to capitalize the word-Him? Not only was her ailing body hurting, her soul was aching too. How nice, this play on words. Great write-this old nurse approves! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:05:00 PM
wow, I am glad I am reading the winners' list to see this awesome poem, Tahera!! Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:57:00 PM
A beautiful piece of poetry, big congrats on the Limitless contest win x
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:04:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your big win in the Limitless contest with this fantastic write and entry..enjoy my dear friend with luv..
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:04:00 AM
Priceless Tahera , one of the best poems on this heartfelt subject. Very well written. Anne
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:02:00 AM
Tahera u did a fabulous job on the Limitless contest with this super write my friend.. luv the intro lines to enhance the piece..good luck in the contest.. u are a winner for sure..luv..
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Date: 5/2/2011 11:35:00 PM
This sure is such an inspiring and comforting approach to the contest, Tahera :) Really liked your approach to the word... wish you the best in the contest :)
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Date: 5/2/2011 10:18:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..p.d.
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