Limited

never the question 
      what if the sky does not fall~

             but blow you away



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Theraven Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 9:54 PM
Maureen, Still loving the lines., ones tap dancing on minds. -Richard
Faulkner Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 7:01 PM
This makes me think of Dorothy and the Wizard of Oz (I'll get you, my pretty - and your little dog too!)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 8:14 AM
Hee hee! Awesome ~<3
Crismond  Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 1:18 PM
I think I much rather be blown ;) Fantastic poem!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Tee hee, ditto! Thank you! xomo
Connelly Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 11:02 AM
Maureen, your poetry always takes me beyond the limits. I love this one!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 8:03 AM
Ooh, now I want to watch The Outer Limits... sounds like a plan ;), xomo!
Levasseur Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 12:45 PM
surely not.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 2:38 PM
all skies fall after all
Krutsinger Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 12:43 PM
I am ready actually.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Ditto xomo!
Theraven Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Maureen, I hate when I struggle to find meaning in Senryu, especially one penned by you. The title 'Limited' escapes my limitations. Please, will you expound? -Richard
Theraven Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 6:58 PM
Mareen, Thank you, thank you. You know your poetry always has, always will. Merry Christmas with warmest wishes. -Richard
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 8:21 AM
Thank you for asking Richard. Merry Christmas to you. warm hugs, xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Certainly, the title refers to “the sky is the limit”, when we are so sure of impending doom, aka “the sky is falling”, we close ourselves (limiting) to the possibility of positive outcome, good that will “blow you away”.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 11:19 PM
I had to write to you because you are always in my thoughts, Wishing you all the best. xovb ~~
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 6:58 AM
Thank you dear! You warm my heart with that. Sending you love and warm wishes for a very Merry Christmas. Hugs vb, keep shining, you are a star in my little world. xomo
Wolf Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 4:48 PM
More than one way to understand this one, methinks. One of them made me laugh. Another has me in awe... Nicely penned, my friend. Peace on Earth, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 7:00 AM
Thank you thank you!!! You know I try to pack ‘em in there. Warm hugs and blessings my friend. xomo
Leffanta Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 11:37 AM
Trump prefers a sucker but the sky is bluer in Canada! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 7:01 AM
You see right through me, must be my blue hair... Mucho hugs brah ~xomo
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 8:51 AM
A whimsy moment super Mo, very airy indeed, brilliant, cheers David
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 9:05 AM
Thank you David, cheers! xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 6:49 AM
Ooh...clinging onto this one! A fave, lady!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 7:06 AM
Thank you Lovely! Warm hugs <3
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