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Limerick In My Pocket

In the following months to come
Want to lose the weight off my bum
Will go to the gym
Will try to think thin
But to toffees I will succumb

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2013

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January 30, 2013 at 1:09 AM

Nice one, I am really uneducated about so many forms, I don't even want to look at the list. I actually after reviewing, remember this one. Nice poem, you said bum,haha "english" humor and you used that near rhyme again, clever clever. Now I think I have exceeded the amount of comments I can give without being reported for stalking, thanks for sharing the wonderful poems.

January 30, 2013 at 7:02 AM

haha you missed one called white Tears, was watching the snow come down when i wrote it..Seren

January 18, 2013 at 3:13 PM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

January 18, 2013 at 5:07 PM

Thank you Debbie....Seren

January 18, 2013 at 2:06 PM

Good taste to which to succumb..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

January 18, 2013 at 2:32 PM

thanks Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2013 at 11:30 PM

seren, I am seeing this one for the first time, and I have to say, you really did a nice job with your limerick. I really like it. Congrats for your win.

January 18, 2013 at 2:32 PM

thank you Andrea

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

January 16, 2013 at 5:26 PM

Well done,.. but to lose too much off there doesn't seem a good idea. Congrats, Seren. Have yourself a wonderful year!! Jag

January 16, 2013 at 5:46 PM

Thanks Jag ...Seren

January 16, 2013 at 6:40 AM

congrats on your win Seren

January 16, 2013 at 5:46 PM

thank you Joseph

January 15, 2013 at 10:42 AM

Good one Seren!Enjoyed the read.Congrats on your win.

January 15, 2013 at 12:16 PM

Thank you Kash...Seren

Poet Destroyer A

January 15, 2013 at 8:41 AM

Seren, ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest. xox~pd

January 15, 2013 at 12:17 PM

Thank you PD ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 15, 2013 at 7:38 AM

Congratulations Seren love this one, leave the toffees behind xx

January 15, 2013 at 12:17 PM

lol you wont eat then Mandy, you would rather a sausage roll....LOL

January 15, 2013 at 5:51 AM

nice job! congrats on placing in the contest!

January 15, 2013 at 12:18 PM

Many thanks Ilene ....Seren

January 6, 2013 at 1:23 PM

Great limerick, friend. I wish you luck in the contest.... I like the looks of your portfolio... I will be sampling ocassionally... Jake

January 6, 2013 at 6:59 PM

Hello Jake nice to see you here, thanks for commenting...Seren

January 1, 2013 at 12:20 PM

Hi Seren, I am a sucker for Limericks, and this one I really love. Rollo

January 1, 2013 at 1:49 PM

hmmm you a toffee eater too rollo, you can keep yuour chocs, some thorntons toffee especially treacle and licquorice, yummy

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 1, 2013 at 9:37 AM

Dear Seren, You should not throw away what you have …gained! Ha-ha. Lovely and refreshing writing. Thank for commenting on my poem: TIME ANEW. Happy New Year!

January 1, 2013 at 11:50 AM

nooo will not throw away, just diminish it slowly ...Seren

Sukmawati Komala

January 1, 2013 at 7:47 AM

so lovely... very creative work !!! <3 OXOX

January 1, 2013 at 11:49 AM

Thank you for stopping by and for your comments

Connie Gildersleeve

January 1, 2013 at 5:18 AM

Lol join the group of many who will blow it on sweet sugary treats. A great limerick Seren. Warm Smiles, Connie

January 1, 2013 at 11:49 AM

would I do a thing like that lol yea I would.....Seren

Jon A Cavanaugh

January 1, 2013 at 3:21 AM

I enjoyed another wonderful limerick of yours. Very witty.

January 1, 2013 at 4:10 AM

lol getting hard now to think of what to write one on ...Seren

January 1, 2013 at 3:06 AM

:)))

January 1, 2013 at 4:10 AM

Hi Kash is that a smile she says with fingers crossed......Happy New Year to you....Seren

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