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This is a follow up to my limerick, "Ottava Rima".

From an idea proposed by Kim Rodrigues.

This is my first Ottava Rima.

Nice girl Ottava Rima knew her place but in her very private room did write a limerick which in this special case was bluer than the dark mask of midnight. Could she read it with a pious straight face? She'd have to; Palm Sunday was in plain sight. She went to church and read her naughty verse. The priest died of shock, she laughed til she burst.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/22/2017 4:56:00 PM
Now here for part two. Another humorous offering my friend. Really nice. Oh and get this, the captcha to post this comment was NUN. : )
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Chris Green
Date: 6/22/2017 5:23:00 PM
Oh, it's the 3 letter/number validation code on soup that you have to type in to leave a comment. I was always told it was called a captcha.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/22/2017 5:05:00 PM
Thanks, Chris. I googled captcha and it looks like a good thing unfortunately I can't access it. And I'm kind of tech-challenged anyway.
Date: 6/22/2017 3:55:00 PM
Hi Dale ,,lol you have a great sense of humor , very enjoyable read:)))
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Date: 6/18/2017 8:50:00 AM
HA HA HA fabulous my friend!!! I sure needed a giggle today thank YOU:-) hugs jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/18/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, I'm glad I could help make your day!
Date: 6/16/2017 9:09:00 PM
Dale, this is a HOOT--made me laugh! Janice
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/18/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thanks, Janice.
Date: 6/16/2017 12:33:00 AM
It's simply hilarious, Dale. I love it.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/16/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thanks, Afzal
Date: 6/15/2017 8:59:00 PM
oh this is so clever, Dale. I really enjoyed how you used this form!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/15/2017 9:22:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. This is my first Ottava Rima. I thought it had 8 syllables per line. When I learned it was ten I had to go back and add on!
Date: 6/15/2017 8:01:00 PM
Sounds like she killed it, whatever she wrote. Love the dark humor, Dale:)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/15/2017 9:22:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel.
Date: 6/14/2017 7:59:00 PM
Hello Dale,it does make me wonder what it was that she wrote,to shock the priest to die. I like this rhyme.
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