Limerence

A night’s blizzard winter season,
I was waiting there for no reason,
Under the trees of cherry blossom,
There came a beauty so awesome,
Her dazzling sight made me blank,
Words cannot describe her I am so frank,
Whether her skin is white or pouring snow is white,
I could never guess it was a tough fight,
My hormones popped out in litres,
That cannot be measured in letters,
She looked at me with her smoky eyes,
It was worth more a Nobel prize,
Her calamine pink lips smiled at me,
She waved her hands and said “excuse me”
The musical winds composed in my ears,
A duet we could sing for 100 years,
This is love! I finally found,
Wanna propose her on the very same ground,
Oh god! My English is poor for a couplet,
But love made myself a great poet,
“You see, I see, my heart fell in dead sea,
Can you dive and take it for cost free”
"Sorry sir, my services are not free,
I charge my customers a thousand and three".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/14/2016 11:27:00 AM
What an unexpected twist.
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/15/2016 2:11:00 AM
Thank you Bab;)
Date: 7/14/2016 9:05:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..It is filled with interesting comparisons..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/15/2016 2:11:00 AM
thank you Sara;) pleasure is mine in reading your works;)
Date: 7/14/2016 6:51:00 AM
Wow...great poem.. you had me at the end!!!!! Sounds like a winning poem if for a contest!!!!
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/14/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Pace;)
Date: 7/13/2016 11:26:00 PM
wonderful write, Madhupriya, I love the flow, rhythm, and the twisted ending I wasn't expecting the conclusion. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for visiting and reading my poem. Hugs Eve
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/14/2016 1:28:00 AM
Thank you Eve;)
Date: 7/13/2016 8:53:00 PM
Nice write Madeupriya.
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/14/2016 1:26:00 AM
Thank you Tim;)
Date: 7/13/2016 4:46:00 PM
An enjoyable read, my friend. Love is powerful when it's true. Thank you for reading me. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/14/2016 1:25:00 AM
Thank you sir, I am a lawyer so i could easily relate to your lawyer poem..;)
Date: 7/13/2016 1:23:00 PM
love the twist at the end Mahdupriya:-) hugs Jan xx
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/14/2016 1:23:00 AM
Thank you Jan;)
Date: 7/13/2016 1:06:00 PM
haha,this is a fun tale!well written Madhupriya!
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/14/2016 1:22:00 AM
Thanks Sara;)
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