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Lime Green In Pool Filter

Praying Mantis at basement door
I had not seen you here before
So lime green you stand out
Scarey enough to make me shout
Died next day in pool filter__gore

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2010

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Gert W. Knop Date: 8/7/2010 6:12:00 AM Poor little praying mantis! At least she could'nt eat up the male. Nicely written and best of luck if this is for John's contest....Gert Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/6/2010 12:52:00 PM Cute limerick, Sara. I hate to see insects dying in pools. But you made the message delightfully lighthearted. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 8/6/2010 12:35:00 PM at least you weren't too frightened. reminds me of the dream i had last night, about a bug creeping out of my mouth, and then this other guys mouth, who was with his friends.they laughed and told him "maybe you need to keep your mouth closed dude." i hope your day is great, Sara(: ~Always&Forever Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/6/2010 10:02:00 AM AHHH, poor mantis. I enjoyed reading this one! Luv, andrea Login to Reply

Raj Nandy Date: 8/6/2010 4:56:00 AM A nice light-hearted limerick Sara ! -Raj Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/6/2010 1:09:00 AM That is sad Sara, poor Mantis, enjoyed your poem,, except the dead bird do to the pool,..p.d. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/5/2010 8:44:00 PM Nice Limerick. enjoyed it, Sara Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 8/5/2010 5:34:00 PM Much enjoyed!Hope you are fine dear!C.C Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 8/5/2010 4:40:00 PM oooph! cool poem! Sara! jimbo Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/5/2010 4:17:00 PM Cool write Sara .. they are scary looking but called the Prophet too.. interesting I think.. great Limerick ..enjoyed ..with luv.. Login to Reply