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Limbo

Flutter of silver wings, The feeling freedom brings, Flapping a harmonious breeze, A chilly glacial freeze, Over my tethered limbs, Counting the Devil's Sins, Moon-face, beaming brightly, Shadows dancing on the nightly, A nocturnal suave, My heart's empty cave...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/6/2014 4:12:00 PM
Oh do, do more, after 'nocturnal sauve...the last line came too fast I felt like I fell of the cliff ;) MORE Light & Love
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Date: 1/5/2014 3:13:00 PM
Fatima, epic and deep, into the middle of nothing. I like the rhymes, and lost feeling of one's own imaginary limbo. I like the theme. Enjoyable .... Linda
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Fatima Ammar
Date: 1/5/2014 3:44:00 PM
I'm honoured you liked it. :) Thanks for reading.

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