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Limbo

The words I mean to say, the rhyme as thoughts do insurrect, as to divine the love I share, the courage that was mine is often missing what the sense entwines. If I do love you, sometimes hollow twine is all my heart can muster up to line and so the grace that heaven gives in sign is muted by comparison, I find ~ And love tht once did merit grace in kind now errors, as in limbo . . . . . undefined!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/19/2011 11:50:00 AM
Paula, I can relate to this feeling of being in "limbo." Love often brings us a mixture of other confusing emotions. Well expressed thoughts! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Paula. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol
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