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Lilly And Billy Street cat Billy's spongy scraggly and cool So, so edgy-sik, he's a grunge-dusky jewel House cat Lily purrs he's so fine Billy scoffs just get in line But he knows deep down he'll gladly play the fool
—Robert Gorelick
Fools rush in when Lily the feline purrs The alluring cat with enticing curves Yet it’s only Billy Who sends Lily silly The one for whom Lily's little heart swerves
—Beryl Edmunds

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Date: 11/13/2024 8:22:00 AM
He is so cool Robert. Love this one as well and the picture, as Billy Crystal use to say. "Looks Marvelous." Thanks for sharing my friend. I forgot to tell you I shared the Pleasantly Plump Limerick with my wife and she absolutely loved it. Looking forward to reading more. You have a created a wonderful addiction for my wife and I.... Thank you for sharing Robert... You and Beryl take it to another level, you work well together...
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Date: 10/8/2024 6:09:00 AM
Yay! You used Lily’s name!
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Date: 9/28/2024 9:01:00 AM
Robert, just glad he seems to get the care he needs and has the smarts to know how to do it.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 9/28/2024 11:03:00 AM
You are un-cat-egorically right, rebels and rakes appeal to many kitties. Robert
Date: 9/27/2024 11:25:00 PM
Fools rush in when Lily the feline purrs-The alluring cat with enticing curves- Yet it’s only Billy- Who sends Lily silly- The one for whom Lily's little heart swerves… Beryl
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/28/2024 5:59:00 PM
Robert, it’s fine by me… Beryl
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 9/28/2024 10:12:00 AM
Cute limerick response, Beryl. I'd be most pleased if I could add it on and make it a collaboration. Also "Cruelty On Parade" if it's alright with you! Brilliant, Robert

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