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lily o' valley dainty strands of bells ~ heaven's chime AP: 2nd place 2023 Posted on July 2, 2019

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Date: 7/6/2019 5:09:00 AM
delicate and sweet.
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Date: 7/6/2019 6:02:00 AM
Thanks, Caren.
Date: 7/4/2019 7:50:00 PM
sweet as can be, Line.
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Date: 7/4/2019 8:39:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/4/2019 4:12:00 AM
I have Japanese lilies in front of my house and when I leave the window open, I smell them in my kitchen. lovely three lines,xo
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Date: 7/4/2019 7:41:00 AM
Lovely indeed, Pixie.
Date: 7/3/2019 9:30:00 AM
Lovely. linda lily Line... salute alkas
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Date: 7/3/2019 10:20:00 AM
Thanks, Alkas. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/3/2019 9:18:00 AM
This is a very beautiful haiku. Specially loved the start, sooo amazing!!! :)
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Date: 7/3/2019 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, Kaveesha, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 7/3/2019 7:01:00 AM
Lovely haiku, Line.
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Date: 7/3/2019 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, Charles.
Date: 7/3/2019 3:00:00 AM
Lovely image line, summer does provide us with some beautiful flowers. Tom
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Date: 7/2/2019 11:14:00 PM
I liked the play on the word s(c)ent..every word is so delicate and expressive
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Date: 7/2/2019 11:38:00 PM
Thank you, Debjani, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/2/2019 10:55:00 PM
Heavenly, indeed. A delicate beauty, Line. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/2/2019 11:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan.
Date: 7/2/2019 9:30:00 PM
So fragrant a write, Line, that I can smell the lilies right through the screen! :) gw
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Date: 7/2/2019 11:37:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Summer is finally here after all our complaining about the delay.

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