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Lilith wrapped in a serpent

Lilith

She turned looking upward
To the enthralling, seductive voice
It emerges Wound around the shade
Of the top fruit branches enigmatic
Fire and flame, devouring
Descending upon her.

Her long sensual hair cascade downward
Melting her petite soft cream form
Trembling, she and him entirely alone
In the fire light of the universe
Feeling the immortal's magic
Of its intense seductive celebration.

The execution performance of its rich words
Spurs an infinite power overcoming her soul.

5/28/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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June 12, 2024 at 1:06 PM
You captured her essence really well. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Beautiful and sensuous write!! All the best in the contest!
La France Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Eve, wonderful poem, best of luck in the contest, hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 2:35 AM
There is emotion of sorts in your poem. Quite visual. Best for a win. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:49 PM
Well done, Eve!
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