Lilies of the Sun

Every dawn, to dream 
the world is somehow re-created. 
The impossible, under the orange. 

With fighting rays protruding
out of the sun, (the heaped unbeatable).
(Foe of the night ash). 
Turning into, (all horizons) far 

Bear yourself to the unbearably high branches- 
letting the ponds cry in sorrow 
wearing your warm diamond cloak 
causing it to magnify it’s intention

Yet, of virgin white lilies, 
If your nature; 
to reach toward the orange 
then reach with all you have 

for hours lilies, your imagination 
brightens everywhere 
calling us all to join
Lifting your burden somewhat 

All the while
The blade and shoe 
that is heavier than lead- 
ever present, eclipses your attempts 
to keep on trudging- 

Oh Lilies,
Grow, in your splendor
Turn on spiral muscle worn thin
as you pry the sky downward
Expressing your efforts

Allowing for me, time to stand 
a necessary task
If I am to continue
To expand my workfist
Wide open into the day

*****Winner of first place award******
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Inspired by: The Impossible Dream by Joe Darion
Written exclusively for Michele Nold-Godleske Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 2:56 AM
Congrats on your success in Michele's Sandracontest.Rgds Brian
Mason Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra!
Mckenzie Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Congratulations on your first place win how wonderful! Laura :)
Gorelick Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 11:42 AM
How wonderful to take a first place..my conratulations on you wonderful poem. BG
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July 19, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on placing first in Michele's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
Winter Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 8:35 AM
WhooHoo!!! Warmest congrats on your well deserved First Place win! XOXOXO
Richards Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 7:48 AM
What a wonderful winning poem this was, Sandra....Congratulations on your 1st place honor!!!! Well deserved! ~ love, Carrie
Goff Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Sandra! this poem took my breath away! jim
Buys Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 2:43 PM
You paint a vivid picture, enhanced in depth by deeper meaning. love the complexity in this poem, a true gem and best of luck in the competition. Love Heidie
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June 26, 2009 at 8:23 PM
Once again, you made it. This is a wonderful poetry. More success. God bless. Ernilando
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June 26, 2009 at 11:53 AM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. The second to last stanza is my favorite. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Have a nice day! Karen
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June 26, 2009 at 5:40 AM
Good luck on this gem in the contest. Vince
Eckiwaudah Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 8:29 PM
beautiful write
Anish Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 6:18 PM
"reach with all you have...." Good line! Sincerely Matthew Anish
Chircop Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 11:59 PM
good luck for the contest--your writes are brilliant and this one not less--beautiful "lilies of the sun"--beautiful--charma
Loving Iii Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 3:53 PM
good luck in the contest. we never stop to think of the strugle to grow. this opened my mind John H Loving III
Curcio Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 10:04 AM
This is a truly wonderful piece. My favorite verse is the next to last, but the entire poem is so visual and emotionally evocative
Strand Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 12:31 AM
Best wishes with this one Sandra.Love the title.Rgds Brian
Goff Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 7:54 PM
holy tomato! Sandra! this poem grew in intense pleasure increasing with chewing on each successive line.....your poem is a winner! and thanks for 'running bear through the bushes' (if there were any on the battlefield, maybe a few, but of the tumbling tumbleweed kind! so maybe 'sprinting bear' ; ) (I actually began chuckling! thx!) ~jim
Richards Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 5:37 PM
Once more, magnificent poetry from you, Sandra ! Well done!!
Higgins Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 5:20 PM
This is such a good write and the second stanza stood out for me as I read it...Best wishes in the contest.
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