Lilies Haiku 39

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                                              Lilies Haiku 39

white lilies in bloom
cotton petals unfurl~
nature`s sacred world.



                                               i     e    s
                                           l        ~     ~
                                         i   ~      ~       i
                                        l       ~    ~    n
                                            e     ~     b
                                                  t    l
                                                  i    o
                                                  h   o 
                                                  w  m

                              t   ~  a                         - f        -u
                       e~        ~         l             -n                      -r
c–o-t-t-o-n    p ~         ~        ~   s     _u                             -l~
 
                                                                   o     r
              n ~a ~t ~u ~r ~e`s   s-a-c-re-d   w          l
                                                                      d.

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