Lilah of the Lilacs

Like violets were her eyes when first I spied the lady with a sweet child’s face who peeked at me from bushes that she stood beside, alluring Lilah, beaming, apple-cheeked! And so it was that more and more I found myself among the lilacs in that place where first we’d met, that I might hear the sound of Lilah’s laugh and glimpse her angel’s face. On fragrant garden paths we knew the thrill of blossoming affection. Poetry was time we spent! But when my love fell ill, the autumn of our bliss was not to be. . . I visit Lilah now where she’s at rest nearby the lilac blooms she liked the best.
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Watt Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 11:21 PM
Beautiful and touching, poetic and sad. I love the assonance of Lilah of the Lilacs. Wasn't she your favorite pet, or was that Callie?
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:09 AM
So very beautiful and heartfelt congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Macfarlane Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 1:22 PM
A beautiful and touching write Andrea. Congrats on your win! Hugs
Merryman Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 8:16 PM
I love this, Andrea! Light-hearted, yet sad at the same time. Congrats on your well deserved first place win! Love, Kim
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 4:18 AM
This was about your Kitty right? It is just beautiful Andrea. Congrats on your top win!
Sietesantos Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Brilliant piece which deserves its top of the tree placement! What lovely imagery - just so beautiful and touching! Congratulations, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Beautiful and sad, congratulations.
Allison Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 4:53 AM
dropping back again with my congrats this truly is a wonderful sonnet my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
Carter Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 11:01 PM
This is so pretty congrats !
Deschler Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 8:40 PM
I have a cousin named Lila, so this poem really touched me deeply each time I read it... A truly beautiful write, Andrea! Congrats on a first place win!
Richards Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 10:10 AM
It must be hard to pick a "best" poem, to single out just one......all your poems are the best, Andrea !! Congrats to you on this one !!
Yvonne Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Stunning, another one that knocked me off my feet. A Fav!
Mehta Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 5:27 AM
A delight to read feeling the honor for the words, congrats on the win, Andrea
A. Sharma Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:52 PM
What a beauty Andrea! I hv missed quite a lot of ur poetry for quite sometime! Congrats on big win!
Haight Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:04 PM
Such a very beautiful Sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 6:26 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 4:31 PM
am absolute delight Andrea - many congrats on your win - definitely one of YOUR best the imagery is divine :-) Hugs jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:57 AM
I'm glad to have the chance to read this beautiful poem here Andrea as I wasn't here when it was written. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Andrea. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Babcock Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 11:56 AM
This is a wonderful write Andrea. Have to look after Aaron tonight as the kids are in town for the football game so trying to catch up on reading and typing but now it is lunch and time for a break. love phyl
O'Haolin Whalen Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 7:03 PM
You wrote this as I would have written it. By that I mean in a kinda archaic way, a very poetic way. With a feel of affection for the words. This, like some of mine, requires a bit of effort on the part of the reader to find the rhythm. Simply put, this is the way I like poetry to be written. A very good write Andrea! (and a very pretty name)
Susan Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 6:55 AM
I love apple-cheeked and how you described her - can really feel the love and admiration in the voice and word choice - should be a classic students study! excellent piece :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 2:04 AM
Beautiful, poignant with lovely imagery Andie. I had to watch the baby again today and tomorrow but maybe Wednesday I can finally enjoy more poetry.
Johnson Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 2:52 PM
I wish I knew a girl like this, she sounds like she's from heaven. I dreamed about a girl like this when I was only seven. I poked my head into the brush to see if she was there. But bees attacked and from that time, I never twice did dare. Hi Andrea, this is so beautifully sad. Have a lovely day.
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