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Premiere Contest WinnerLilac Dusk

In dusk's umbral mist
phantoms hover 
across August's white embers,
humming their pale lilac chant
through bare trees
chiming with fledgling icicles.

Fields of vestal amethyst
splay past frozen fences
and sepia skeletons
of summer grass.

I listen
to diaphanous lyrics 
of a mauve moon
from my gelid porch,
throwing coffee
from my hot cup
to watch it freeze
in mid air
and fall like rhinestones
on the waiting ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 1:27 PM
a beautiful wintery poem to read on a hot July day. I've seen this before but thought I would revist one of your trophy wins. In my mind, half your poems are already trophy winners.
Cozart Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 3:10 PM
Aw, aren't you nice.
Ravidas Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 6:57 AM
Agreed with Carrie: breath-taking is the very word.
Cozart Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Thanks very much, Kurt!
Schiavina Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 8:40 AM
It's a true masterpiece. Congratulations!
Cozart Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Thanks, Frances.
Richards Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Wow, ........this is breath-taking poetry. Those last few lines are perfection, Dale. Your trophy is so well deserved :)
Cozart Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Thanks, Carrie!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 2:58 PM
It's no surprise that this magnificent piece is number one on the winning chart! What a wonderful spectrum of purple! So beautiful and a fave! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Cozart Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Thank you very much, Pandita.
Smith Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Brilliant work Dale, congratulations...
Cozart Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
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August 3, 2018 at 11:52 AM
I have never seen a sunset this color, but the photo and the poem tie it to the cold weather so well. You're an excellent writer, Dale. I must start reading more of your work. Congratulations on a worthy first-place win! Hugs, Carolyn
Cozart Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Thanks so much, Carolyn.
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 3:38 PM
aha!! I see it was with Brian!!
Cozart Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Yes, it was Brian.
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 3:37 PM
wow, on the picture and the poem both. Love the idea of the coffee being thrown and the imagery you created there! I don't know what contest this won in (dawn/dust is not judged yet, is it?) but I see you got a number one, deservedly so. Congratulations!
Gentry Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Beautiful imagery.
Cozart Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Dale. Congratulations on your Trophy win! Sandra
Cozart Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra.
Stebbings Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on you win, Dale, with this delicately painted piece. // Barry
Cozart Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thanks, Barry.
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July 31, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Lovely imagery. Congrats on your gold medal win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thank you, Line!
Gentile Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 1:29 PM
These are exquisite images, Dale Just beautiful !!
Cozart Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Aw, thanks so much, Mike.
Ashley Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Such a celebration of beauty in your exquisite poem, Dale. Breathtaking! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:10 PM
Thanks, Susan.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 6:23 PM
There are so many beauteous wonders in each season. Your ending captures the thrill of of these wonders. It is simply divine! : )
Cozart Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 4:18 PM
gorgeous gorgeous imagery Dale absolutely a gem my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Thanks very much, Jan.
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