Lilac Dusk Premiere Contest Winner

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In dusk's umbral mist
phantoms hover 
across August's white embers,
humming their pale lilac chant
through bare trees
chiming with fledgling icicles.

Fields of vestal amethyst
splay past frozen fences
and sepia skeletons
of summer grass.

I listen
to diaphanous lyrics 
of a mauve moon
from my gelid porch,
throwing coffee
from my hot cup
to watch it freeze
in mid air
and fall like rhinestones
on the waiting ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/31/2020 1:27:00 PM
a beautiful wintery poem to read on a hot July day. I've seen this before but thought I would revist one of your trophy wins. In my mind, half your poems are already trophy winners.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/31/2020 3:10:00 PM
Aw, aren't you nice.
Date: 5/19/2019 6:57:00 AM
Agreed with Carrie: breath-taking is the very word.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/19/2019 9:24:00 AM
Thanks very much, Kurt!
Date: 8/13/2018 8:40:00 AM
It's a true masterpiece. Congratulations!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/13/2018 9:21:00 AM
Thanks, Frances.
Date: 8/12/2018 3:51:00 PM
Wow, ........this is breath-taking poetry. Those last few lines are perfection, Dale. Your trophy is so well deserved :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/12/2018 4:11:00 PM
Thanks, Carrie!
Date: 8/3/2018 2:58:00 PM
It's no surprise that this magnificent piece is number one on the winning chart! What a wonderful spectrum of purple! So beautiful and a fave! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/3/2018 4:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Pandita.
Date: 8/3/2018 12:14:00 PM
Brilliant work Dale, congratulations...
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/3/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
Date: 8/3/2018 11:52:00 AM
I have never seen a sunset this color, but the photo and the poem tie it to the cold weather so well. You're an excellent writer, Dale. I must start reading more of your work. Congratulations on a worthy first-place win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/3/2018 12:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Carolyn.
Date: 8/1/2018 3:38:00 PM
aha!! I see it was with Brian!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/1/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Yes, it was Brian.
Date: 8/1/2018 3:37:00 PM
wow, on the picture and the poem both. Love the idea of the coffee being thrown and the imagery you created there! I don't know what contest this won in (dawn/dust is not judged yet, is it?) but I see you got a number one, deservedly so. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/31/2018 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Beautiful imagery.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/1/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 7/31/2018 5:05:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Dale. Congratulations on your Trophy win! Sandra
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/31/2018 5:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra.
Date: 7/31/2018 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on you win, Dale, with this delicately painted piece. // Barry
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/31/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thanks, Barry.
Date: 7/31/2018 11:17:00 AM
Lovely imagery. Congrats on your gold medal win, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/31/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 7/30/2018 1:29:00 PM
These are exquisite images, Dale Just beautiful !!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/30/2018 2:15:00 PM
Aw, thanks so much, Mike.
Date: 7/28/2018 8:33:00 PM
Such a celebration of beauty in your exquisite poem, Dale. Breathtaking! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/28/2018 9:10:00 PM
Thanks, Susan.
Date: 7/28/2018 6:23:00 PM
There are so many beauteous wonders in each season. Your ending captures the thrill of of these wonders. It is simply divine! : )
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/28/2018 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 7/28/2018 4:18:00 PM
gorgeous gorgeous imagery Dale absolutely a gem my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/28/2018 4:28:00 PM
Thanks very much, Jan.
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