Like What You See, Mister --

The daily rag's a painted lady her poses alluring her promises assuring ~ her goods rarely enduring

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Judy Ball

Date: 4/7/2021 5:48:00 PM

This is such a good write my friend. I agree with Caren, it can go in several directions. Good show. God Bless, JB

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/7/2021 6:14:00 PM

The problem, I guess, is when this poem veers off into several erections. (Oh, I just couldn't resist this one). ~ Big Bad Wolf

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/6/2021 11:45:00 AM

Looking forward to part two lol. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/6/2021 5:45:00 PM

Part two costs more, Tom! lol. Thanks, gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/6/2021 8:53:00 AM

This could be taken a few interesting directions; I am enjoying it .

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/6/2021 5:45:00 PM

All roads lead to Rio -- Bob Hope and Dorothy Lamour