Like Water

she cool
good enough to quench my thirst
how we met
made the birds sing
reminiscin of my childhood
the touch of my mother
and my childish laughter
she cool
like water
good,with tears of laughter
lovers in the cool nights
forget dinner
for we do alot
to make us happy
forget the trouble and the hustlin
for they only about to end the joy
have me have you
to quench each other's thirst
like water
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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A   Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Cool enough poem. congratties!!!
Kopp Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Congratulations on the feature.Thanks for sharing you creative thoughts and musings today.
Hoot Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Very talented! Good job! Thank you for sharing and congratulations! :)
Austin Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 6:24 AM
I like your style. Kind of hip. Off the cuff. No b.s., just rappin'...Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Emmanuel. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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