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Like Water

she cool good enough to quench my thirst how we met made the birds sing reminiscin of my childhood the touch of my mother and my childish laughter she cool like water good,with tears of laughter lovers in the cool nights forget dinner for we do alot to make us happy forget the trouble and the hustlin for they only about to end the joy have me have you to quench each other's thirst like water

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Date: 4/1/2010 2:05:00 PM
Cool enough poem. congratties!!!
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Date: 4/1/2010 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations on the feature.Thanks for sharing you creative thoughts and musings today.
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:45:00 PM
Very talented! Good job! Thank you for sharing and congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/30/2010 6:24:00 AM
I like your style. Kind of hip. Off the cuff. No b.s., just rappin'...Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 3/29/2010 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Emmanuel. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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