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Premiere Contest WinnerLike the Lotus

God does not blink in his eternal watch, because time does not come in to it at all! pure stillness reigns where he is awake, no breath, no whisper there is nothing at all! in a turbulent pond- like a lotus calm! slaves we mortals are to the whip of time, we measure it all day, measure it all night by the beat of the heart, rhythm of the breath, at the birth of a child, to the end of our lives, by the revolutions of earth, Sunset, Sunrise! look deep within the calmness of your Soul, there is a glow of divinity that is real you, there is stillness within that is stillness of God, the absolute truth that doesn't change at all, in a turbulent pond - like a lotus calm! the absolute truth is not the slave of time, because it is so still time does not exist at all, life’s many gains and losses, defeats and pain, have no longer any meaning in this domain, in a turbulent pond- like a lotus calm! align your mind with that divine stillness, perceive the glowing unending brightness, cast away the body, surrender your soul, nothing exists! you are part of absolute truth, the lotus glows - the pond was a mirage!
1st placement premium competition Lotus of my heart poetry contest Mystic Rose Rose sponsor Written 27/12/2020
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Costales Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:58 PM
Hi Krish, This is soothing, peaceful and calm -like the lotus. I am drawn to the stillness it conveys which can only exists in the presence of a God “that does not blink in his eternal watch” - love this opening line.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 8:23 PM
Thanks Josefina! Yes, It is a vision of divinity I believe in and is based on my concept that truth is eternal and unchanging and when it does not change, time ceases!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Enjoyed your first place win, especially stanza 3. Congrats
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:52 PM
Thanks Barabara Much appreciate your visit and your kind words of support. God Bless.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Congratulations on your win. An Amazing write with a wonderful picture. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings..............
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 3:18 PM
Paula, my gratitude and thanks! appreciate your kind words! With kind regards Krish
Jayasankar Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 12:13 AM
Wow Krishji... just now read this wonderful poem... every word so true.... second stanza.. just loved it... This poem will be my fav.. Congrats on your great win!.. ~ Ani
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 3:26 AM
Ani thanks so much and fav is an honour! Pleased you like it! God bless!:)
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:37 PM
This is a beauty past compare,deep thoughts too. Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win. Enjoy the honour.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:48 PM
Thank you Rama! So pleased this reached the hearts and minds of so many! God bless! Krish
Seeker Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:21 PM
Beautifully portrayed, Krish! A deep revelation, indeed. Congrats on winning the first prize!
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:50 PM
Thank you! I am pleased it touched your heart! May God be with you!
Rose  Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Your poetry blew me away, I floated upon the petals of your wise words, all the way to the end, congratulations on your 1st place win, loved it Krish.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:07 PM
Mystic I am honoured! Thank you and pleased through your contest I could share my vision of divinity! Blessings and good wishes! :)
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January 2, 2021 at 2:55 PM
BIG congrats Krish, on your trophy win with this awesome write--your gifted pen shines.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:09 PM
Thanks Vijay! delighted I could communicate my vision well and share it with others! God bless and wish you the best this year.
La France Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 1:58 PM
Krish, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in Mystic's Lotus contest, well done _Constance
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:09 PM
Thanks Constance, pleasantly surprised! Gos bless! warm regards! Krish
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January 2, 2021 at 1:19 PM
Absolutely beautiful Krish. A wonderful poem of faith entwined in the image of a lotus flower and the pond where it thrives. Love the last line - "the pond was a mirage." Congratulations on your first place win! Happy New Year!
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Sam delighted to get your congrats on this write! I am glad I could share my vision of spirituality with this poem! God bless and a Happy New Year to you!
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