Like the Fluttering Wings of Butterflies

Like the fluttering wings of butterflies
                            swiftly gliding through the open arms
                                    of the haunting charms
                                          of sacred skies.

                           Flags unfurled, a breathtaking fleet,
                            a royal flotilla, majestic and proud;
                   heroic mariners of will ~ and grace endowed.
                An orchestra in motion, performing a melodic suite.

                      Wings, like sails, seize the wily breeze,
                       a mystical journey, far, wide and free;
                tethered in the rhythm, of the power of the sea.
                   Lofty, drifting, clouds above, in silent reverie.




Date: August 7, 2022
For: Simile Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Hilo Poet
No placement
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Watt Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Paulette, I so enjoy watching butterflies, whether they be flying solo or in "a royal flotilla". Love the way you have depicted these graceful creatures. I especially appreciated the line, "an orchestra in motion, performing a melodic suite." It's always a treat to read your gorgeous poetry ~ John
Calasibetta Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 8:08 AM
John, thank you for your complimentary comments~yes, butterflies are so graceful as they glide through the air; they seem to bring a moment of peace. :)Paulette
George Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:18 AM
Wow.... so sweet, aloft on butterfly wings ! All the Best in the contest, Paulette...
Calasibetta Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:23 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Valsa~have a wonderful day! :)Paulette
Buhagiar Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 1:20 AM
A melodious poem that should be appreciated. Best for a win.
Calasibetta Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:03 AM
Thank you, Victor, I appreciate your comments. :)Paulette
La France Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Paulette, so beautifully penned and magical, best of luck in the contest, blessings ~Constance
Calasibetta Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 3:27 PM
Thank you, Constance, I value your positive comments. :)Paulette
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