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Like sugar to tea, Sodium to food, You're tough to defy What else can I say? You leave me seduced Like a moth by A blazing flame. You taste divine On my palette! And I'm left Craving for More, and more. I just Can't quit - You Submitted for... Diminished Hexaverse Contest Your Choice of Subject Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger Date written: 06/11/2022

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Date: 7/13/2022 2:15:00 PM
Big congratulations, Edward , to a beautiful well deserved win. Blessings my friend
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Date: 7/12/2022 9:53:00 PM
"I just can't quit you" - such an endearing way to finish. You are always the romantic! Congrats on your win, Edward ~ John
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/13/2022 5:26:00 AM
Thank you very much, John:-)
Date: 7/12/2022 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this entertaining poem Edward. Blessings xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/12/2022 6:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie:-) I'm so glad to see you back here again, my friend. God bless.
Date: 7/11/2022 1:36:00 PM
Lovely obsession of love all folded into a romantic feast Edward! Congratulations my friend. Nicely done!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/18/2022 4:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam:-)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/11/2022 4:22:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam:-)
Date: 6/12/2022 5:32:00 AM
Great metaphoric write. Allure of the "you"!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/12/2022 5:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

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