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Like Silver Birds

I watch the ribbons of the silver birds crisscross the sky as raindrops from my soul roll gently down my cheeks I gave you all the love I had to give and yet like silver birds in sky above you flew away March 30, 2019

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/29/2019 8:13:00 PM

What a lovely write John! Congrats on your placement!;)

John Gondolf
Date: 6/29/2019 8:23:00 PM

Thank you, Bren, I appreciate it. John

John Hamilton

Date: 6/29/2019 7:55:00 PM

Nice write John, congrats on a fine placement!

John Gondolf
Date: 6/29/2019 8:14:00 PM

Thanks so much, John, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. John

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/3/2019 6:37:00 AM

This is why I love reading poetry, because it helps one to express that sadness in a cathartic way, in a way that helps heal the heart. I love this John. Congratulations on your well deserved win! Beautiful! : ) xxoo

John Gondolf
Date: 4/3/2019 7:02:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful comment, Connie, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2019 3:13:00 PM

wow, you took the theme to a very different and poignant place. well done and congrats for your win

John Gondolf
Date: 4/2/2019 3:21:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea, I appreciate it. John

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/2/2019 12:28:00 PM

Hi John, What a beautifully sad poem! Congratulations. Hugs, Jennifer.

John Gondolf
Date: 4/2/2019 12:56:00 PM

Hi Jenny, than you so much for your kind words. All my best to you. John

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/1/2019 7:25:00 PM

Congratulations, John. very sad and romantic!

John Gondolf
Date: 4/1/2019 7:28:00 PM

Thanks, Ralph, I appreciate it. John

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2019 4:52:00 AM

- Congratulations John, a lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf
Date: 4/1/2019 6:32:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/31/2019 10:45:00 PM

Congratulations John, on this win. Your thoughts touch my heart. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 4/1/2019 4:16:00 AM

Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate you and your kind words. John

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/31/2019 8:27:00 PM

So much pain and sorrow expressed by so few beautifully-written words, John. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win! Sandra

John Gondolf
Date: 3/31/2019 8:35:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra, I appreciate it.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/30/2019 1:34:00 PM

So many moments and emotions linger within. Sometimes, the wind carries love so far away- while true love, it will always stay. This is so beautiful and tender my dear friend. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 3/30/2019 5:49:00 PM

Thank you for your comments and words of romantic wisdom, my dear friend. I appreciate you and your thoughts. All my best. John

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/30/2019 8:09:00 AM

So sad and beautifully written John! Have a nice day :)

John Gondolf
Date: 3/30/2019 8:21:00 AM

Thank you for you comments, Heidi, I appreciate you. John