Jeanne Mcgee Poet Tetractys

Like Sailing

boat
hovers
pelican
sails on the air 
effortless ~ like the freely floating ship 
cresting above the curling ocean wave
smoothly showing
perfectly
designed
craft



10-2-2020
Double Tetractys 4 Poetry Contest
3rd place

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Caren Krutsinger November 20, 2020 at 6:15 PM Congrats on your win in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2020 at 7:30 PM back with my congrats, Jeanne.

Susan Ashley October 16, 2020 at 5:51 PM Jeanne, your poem portrays beauty with amazing imagery. Congratulations for your fine win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2020 at 8:40 AM - Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest, Jeanne :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper October 15, 2020 at 7:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Jeanne. Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2020 at 1:53 PM perfect anology too!!

Darlene De Beaulieu October 5, 2020 at 12:59 PM Hello Jeanne McGee, you made me feel on the boat. Enjoy your day my friend.