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Zero
Wind chill
Hear the wind
How it whistles
And I in my bed
Pulling the covers tight
I think of brewing coffee
The image of that steaming cup
Then I see ice caked on my window
Glance at my wife    asleep    and snuggle-up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 11:30 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Daver. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2011 at 1:46 PM
Snuggles sound a whole lot better, Daver! A sweet and fun write, Jack Frost will envy you both. Thinking "cakes"...I'd better head downstairs before my son comes home for dinner. So wishing you and yours the best! Love, Mikki
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January 30, 2011 at 9:09 AM
We have that feel here too!!! And no not a father , an uncle and godfather... But this is for a friend to cheer up... always Michael
George   Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 12:54 PM
Yes! It i snowing here in NC. It inspired me to write an etheree too. Great writing my friend. Lainie
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January 21, 2011 at 7:57 AM
So very cute Dave and we are experiencing this same weather here in N.J. and snuggling up seems better than not.. and that coffee sure sounded good but not as good as the snuggle.. Ron would agree..haha.. thankxx for a happy poem my friend.. happy weekend..
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January 20, 2011 at 4:44 PM
ah, this is so adorable. haha. REally, I love it, Daver. Goodnight now. Gotta scram!
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January 20, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Ahhhh, this is a beautiful Etheree, so much thought given here. Thank you for this As Always, Shar
Haick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 10:21 AM
That's the best decision right there, Dave...coffee can wait when you can choose snuggling up! I've enjoyed this warm picture hanging here.. It's 24 degrees here today and I'm glad I don't have to out! Stay warm.. Love, Annalise
Brown Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 9:35 AM
You are rocking today Daver. Love this one going into my favorites. Love, Carol
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January 20, 2011 at 9:22 AM
daver..enjoyed your snuggle-up feeling--- yum! thanks for your funny remarak on my basketball piece.. the 3-point dunk was an exagerration for the fun of ita all..:) hugggs, nette
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January 20, 2011 at 8:39 AM
It's such a comforting feeling to hear the winds howling outside while you are snuggled up warm in bed, thinking of that steaming coffee (in my case tea). Your etheree takes us from bitter cold to warm comfort in such a delightful way, Daver. Hope the winter isn't being too harsh, but where you live I'm sure this description applies. Excellent poem, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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January 20, 2011 at 8:07 AM
Winter has a way of creating cuddle time.Enjoyed reading your work this morn..Need one of those coffee pots that works on a timer...Sara
Neels Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 7:40 AM
Great choice Dave, you can always have that cup later.. This made me smile this afternoon ;-) love Wilma
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