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Like Feathers, Fly

Where have the years gone- like soft feathers, they soon fly, floating in the breeze of life, fragile, wispy thoughts to gather in, one by one; to stroke each with loving care, smoothing the edges ruffled in their years of flight; feathers of our memory. They fly much faster as we age; it seems to us that time has learned a new step that spins us around to fast-forward those feathers that we just held yesterday; grasped from us so quick before we could comprehend their designs and bright colors. Relish each moment lest the thief of time stops by and those feathers fly no more. Spend time with each one. Caress the silky texture; smooth the separated vanes to flawless beauty before they are whisked away with memories- or the soul.
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Radice Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest Sandra. I'd never heard of the choka form before so thank you for introducing me to it with this perfect example. It takes much poetry skill to bring everything together as you have here within the strict structure of its required syllables. Cheers - Gary
Ashley Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 7:04 PM
Relish each moment, indeed. Your poem is exquisitely thought provoking and beautifully expressed, Sandra. A metaphorical gem. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 5:35 PM
Thank you once again, Susan, for your uplifting comments and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Toney Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 12:06 PM
Sandra, your simile is true for me - "Where have the years gone- like soft feathers, they soon fly..." How important it is to "relish each moment". Congratulations! Your skillful use of the choka poetry form has resulted in your win on Mile 9 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 10 has already started!
Haight Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 5:43 PM
Thank you, Mark! So pleased that you enjoyed my poem, and I am very happy to be on the Mile 9 winner's list!
Callus Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 5:38 PM
I love this poem, Sandra. Luckily you overstepped the length because it would have been a pity not to have had that 3rd choka! Full marks from me:) Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Congratulations, here, THIS time you worked too hard!!! I think we only were to do three 3-line stanzas!! Marvelous imagery and symbolism, Sandra
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 9:18 AM
beautifully penned but sad Sandra - time passes us by so so quickly and we must cherish the days we have left:-) hugs jan xx
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 7:39 PM
This shows how precious life and relationships are. Congratulations and thanks for being in the contest.
Wigley Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 11:41 PM
A lovely Choka set, Sandra, worth many re-reads, so a #7 and I fave it. Thanks, Viv x
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Thank you, Viv. So nice of you to stop by with your uplifting and positive comments and nice 7 rating! Much appreciated! Sandra
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 1:18 PM
A soft sadness to this write. Good luck in the contest Sandra...
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Thank you, Charlie, for your supportive comments. We have to make each day count...they pass by too fast.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 5:38 AM
This lovely poem has a melancholy feel to it Sandra. Beautifully conveyed. Hope this does greet in the contest! 7 : )
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:20 PM
Thank you, Connie. Guess I was feeling melancholy when I wrote it. Time is going by too quickly...I appreciate the nice rating and good wishes for the contest. Hugs. Sandra
Daniel Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 5:03 AM
Great metaphor of feathers:)
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Thank you once again, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
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