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Angel, Statue, Sculpture, Angelic, Gothic, Tombstone

Like Decaying Bouquets


                     My soul is bleeding, bleeding,
      as a thousand sharp daggers stab me;
  for the headstones are green mossed,
and I hold to my heart tattered memories; 
                    like decaying bouquets,
        and will 'till my last gasp !


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April 10, 2022


Poetry/Free Verse/Like Decaying Bouquets
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1446-865-10
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France


Written for the Standard contest, Bite Size Poem, No 42
sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 05/01/2022

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 3:45 PM
Powerful poem, Constrance ~ well penned. Congrats on your top placement!
Drowley Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations! Beautifully penned as love hangs on to the very end.
La France Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 1:05 AM
David, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Hutchings Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations, Constance! Your poem is hauntingly beautiful with superb imagery. Well done! Blessings...Meghan!
La France Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 9:05 PM
Meghan, thank you so much for the congratulations and for the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Kauffman Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 3:29 PM
So mournful and plaintive Constance. Congratulations on your win. Sending hugs on wings of comfort and blessing.
La France Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 9:06 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, hugs and blessings ~Constance
Leffanta Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 11:34 AM
Mourning is best done in the evening! Aloha!
La France Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 10:11 AM
Rico, if only... grief would stay away from my days, thanks for the visit ~Constance
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