LIKE CHILDs PLAY-Lune Haiku

like child’s play throwing up my arms leaves landing
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Parker Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 11:32 PM
Welcome to Autumn! Memories play well against the gold and red background. :o)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 4:53 AM
Happy Autumn, Arlo! Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 6:27 PM
You've really nailed this one, Kim. I can just picture exactly what you've written. The imagery is perfect. Huzzah! ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 7:01 PM
Thanks so much…swoosh!
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November 13, 2023 at 4:45 PM
No greater joy than to act like a child long after the rush of youth has passed us by, nice one Kim, you bring me back to a simpler time of life, when throwing leaves in the air made my heart skip, :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 6:10 PM
We should enjoy those simple moments! God bless you, Rose!
Hind Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 3:29 PM
This is so cute- I could envision it.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Baker Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Leaves are still fun to play in, Kim. Fun poem to read, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Thank you so much! And how fun that a friend’s daughter posted a picture of her son doing this after I wrote my poem :) Blessings!
Lawless Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 12:59 PM
You got it!!! and puddles to splash in...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 4:11 PM
Yes, John! Let’s:)
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