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I wish I could be like Benjamin Button Me oh my wouldn’t that be sumthin My hair would grow thicker no longer thin and grey From winter’s cold December I’d progress back to May Stronger much faster my body restored No nursing home for me I would never be bored. Enjoying my retirement again but in reverse The best part of it all no need for a hearse. Then back to work life at the peak of my career Cash for me to spend on those who are dear Life would be much better my thoughts growing clearer My looks would start improving as I looked in the mirror In a matter of years I’d be back in school University days sweet a time to be cool Savouring each moment stopping to smell each flower Romance back to innocence reclaiming youthful power Then becoming a child delightful and free No more big worries or responsibility I’d go from toddler wobbles to a baby so sweet Giggles and tickles mom rubbing my feet My earthly needs met cuddly comfort and love Affectionate eyes so adoring looking down from above If like Benjamin Button my life was lived reversed Would I have lived it better being it was formerly rehearsed? Inspired by the movie Benjamin Button staring Brad Pitt.

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Date: 11/8/2019 8:21:00 AM
Hi Richard, it is a unique concept, living life backwards. I have always meant to watch the movie but as yet, I haven't. Your poetic skill does make this piece sing and if the movie is anything like your wonderful poem, then it shall be worth the watch. Excellent work as always, Richard. This work has been a joy to read. A fav. Have a wonderful Friday. Blessings....Mike.
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Date: 9/20/2019 9:51:00 AM
I enjoyed that movie. It's an interesting concept to ponder. Your words are well portrayed on that topic of growing younger.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/20/2019 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Juliet. ;0)
Date: 6/22/2019 12:27:00 AM
Sounds like a good plan to me, provide that the mind does not change in reverse. I wouldn’t want to revert to the stupidity of youth. Very well expressed in a highly entertaining fashion, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/22/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Geoffrey.
Date: 6/18/2019 8:34:00 AM
Hi Richard - think I have seen this film - he is born as an old man and then his life reverses as he becomes younger and younger until he reaches babyhood! An excellent movie with Brad Pitt. Well penned Richard a great poem. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/22/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer.
Date: 5/3/2019 1:29:00 PM
This one I love, Richard! We would do it all different as we gain back our vitality, really get to know those around us and embrace our first loves...moms, grandmothers, etc...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2019 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Kim. Hugs Rick
Date: 4/29/2019 6:01:00 AM
What a delightful and amusing poem it is my friend, Richard! Have enjoyed its depth and beauty, however, for your information the idea is not Benjamin's Button but that of...Plato, yes, the Greek philosopher who foretells that things would be reversed one day and will happen the way your beautiful poem describes!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2019 8:16:00 AM
Benjamin Button is the name of the Character in the movie that inspired me to write this piece. Happy to give credit to Plato for the original idea. Thanks for the visit Demetrios.
Date: 4/28/2019 5:02:00 PM
Hi Richard: What a unique turnabout in reversing your life like a present from God. And having the wisdom to stay out of trouble before it begins. Great poetic observation!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2019 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Ralph.
Date: 4/28/2019 4:15:00 PM
I have seen the film more than once.. the message is powerful and deep! Your rendition in poetry is captivating! How tantalising to imagine living backward! So pleased to read again your unique poetry, Richard.. my deepest regards and blessings.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2019 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Besma and blessings to you as well.
Date: 4/27/2019 6:04:00 PM
I didn't see that movie, but I "hear" your poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2019 6:10:00 PM
Thanks.:0).
Date: 4/27/2019 3:48:00 PM
Wouldn't it be grand?! But then the final line is the key isn't it? ;) You never disappoint Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2019 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Flo.
Date: 4/27/2019 12:12:00 PM
rich, how provoking is this piece... great food for thought!... many thanks for hosting a fine contest... huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2019 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Nette, hugs Rick.
Date: 4/27/2019 11:17:00 AM
I enjoyed the read of this brilliant theme..you said it so well Richard...excellent poetry.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2019 5:41:00 PM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 4/27/2019 10:58:00 AM
Brilliant verse Richard, loved it. Tom.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2019 5:41:00 PM
Thanks Tom.
Date: 4/27/2019 9:56:00 AM
Very well penned,Richard and delightful P.R
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2019 5:47:00 PM
Thanks Panagiota.

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