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Like An Autumn Sun

I thought I had forgotten the end of summertime, I thought I stopped remembering that last night you were mine. Moments side by side before fresh petals dried. But like an autumn sun in skies of blue, Low I sink in you. Recalling our slow dance far from crowds and friends, My fleeting light through leaves, through thoughts and quiet love in cobbled narrow streets. To first October rain pit-pattering in streams Flowing,slowly falling like early threaded dreams. Swaying,gently playing sad fluting melodies. But like an autumn sun in skies of blue, Low I sink in you. Suddenly I think,I think of you. Upon your tired shoulders I set my orange hue.

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Date: 9/8/2023 5:56:00 PM
Just going to take a moment...... to thank you from the bottom of my heart; for commenting on one of my poems, so I could find yours! I found a place to sink into for a bit! Warmly A.S.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/8/2023 6:28:00 PM
It was my pleasure to find your poem...and thankyou for stopping by to read my little scribbles.
Date: 9/17/2020 10:43:00 AM
I loved how you used the words. Twisting them to places, memories and wishes. Thank you Charmaine for sharing the outstanding poetry.
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Date: 6/28/2020 4:22:00 PM
your words shine like the sun....as it causes the moon the glow and beyond....sparking inspiration for every pen....whispering to the heart "let me in"....oh how i Love your style....this fan of yours will never show denial....Beautiful write charmaine....;)
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Date: 4/12/2020 10:05:00 AM
Beautiful, Eloquently written. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
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Date: 2/3/2020 10:51:00 AM
You captivate with your beautiful lines, Charm. Metaphorically impressive! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/4/2020 2:59:00 PM
A lovely penned piece Charmaine, such a lovely autumnal write. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 1/2/2020 12:32:00 PM
What a serene image; beautiful in its peaceful ending. Hope you have been well Charma :)
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Date: 12/24/2019 4:39:00 PM
A gem Charmaine. Merry Christmas. love phyl
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Date: 12/24/2019 1:33:00 PM
A stunning piece, Charmaine. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 12/6/2019 9:29:00 PM
Sublime...lovely!
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Date: 11/15/2019 5:44:00 PM
Always magical, Charmaine written with The tip of an Angel's wing. I see I responded earlier. Sorry. Panagiota Romios
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Date: 11/13/2019 4:47:00 PM
Just a beautiful write.
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Date: 11/6/2019 7:09:00 AM
Truly beautiful and enchanting is this inspirational piece my great friend. A fav and a gem.
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Date: 11/4/2019 12:55:00 AM
Beautiful and enchanting... signature Charmaine. Thank you for your visit to my page, dear. Blessings...
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Date: 11/3/2019 9:32:00 PM
Just delicious to read Charmaine; nice to hear a lady whisper her love so lovingly;-) a fave;-) I have returned (apparently! Lol) I posted a bitter sweet piece should you not know xxx ooo
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Date: 10/26/2019 6:06:00 PM
Wonderful rhyme. Another gem. Enjoyed immensely.
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Date: 10/23/2019 1:02:00 PM
Beautiful....Low I sink in you. I'm so glad that you picked up your pen once again and brought forth this gift....TAH ps...I love your orange hue
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Date: 10/20/2019 3:26:00 PM
Beautiful words... Very romantic .
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Date: 10/17/2019 7:35:00 PM
Gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/4/2019 4:56:00 PM
A heavenly day be yours, Charmaine! Needless to tell you how wonderful your work is. Always sparkling with brilliance! I, too, wrote a poem about autumn and love today. But~ you are the master, I,but a humble and most grateful student. Panagiota Romios xxxxx
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Date: 10/4/2019 7:21:00 AM
Lovely...your poems always are. I love how this just sings...I wonder if I could set it to banjo melody??? Probably not.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/31/2020 4:37:00 PM
Im sure it can :)
Date: 10/2/2019 3:39:00 PM
Your words float delicately in sweet poetic winds, Charmaine. Just lovely! :)
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Date: 10/2/2019 1:04:00 PM
Excellent use of metaphor, comparing yourself to a sinking "autumn sun." You have always shown a gift for writing romance, Charmaine. So nice to see you back here, dear. I hope Christina is doing well! Maybe she's in school now and you have more time for poetry? Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/2/2019 11:26:00 AM
Something this beautiful, one cannot ever forget...good to read you again on ps
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Date: 10/2/2019 10:39:00 AM
A beautiful poem that is a gift. Bless you with many more. Prayers for you
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