Like Airborne Angels, At The Cusp Of Night


Morning thoughts of you roses full of dew 
gardens full of summer love, sweet romance  
here inside your arms we rebirth brand-new 
like the morning sun when it starts to dance 

Aborning sunlight cortef hours .... loved,   
like the pied colors of a rainbow burst.    
glancing tinted shades two petals englobed
to the loving hands of time, we come first. 

Inside this garden youthful hours of truth 
reborn like the seasons we live nonetheless 
despite of the winter mulched in vermouth 
we pair up nicely, ... to nature's headdress

Morning blushes her cheeks and we turn right,      
like airborne angels, at the cusp of night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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DiMino Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 8:22 AM
"Aborning sunlight cortef hours .... loved, like the pied colors of a rainbow burst. glancing tinted shades two petals englobed to the loving hands of time, we come first." -- Very beautiful! True poetry. Great poem!
Cunningham Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 12:17 AM
A very romantic sonnet Vie, love is certainly in the air. Tom
Empress Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Dear rose, you have a romantic heart, as romantic as your user name, rose! Mystical too, and captivating , just like your heart, your poetry is so perfumed and alluring! Pleasure reading this heartfelt poem so well woven and delivered! Best wishes always. Sending you light today and always
Rose  Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 11:33 AM
You seem to give me wings each time you leave a comment dear Ink. What a rare gift it is to uplift someone , I as so glad we connected , take care and may God's choicest angel be at your side today and always, V
One Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 10:53 AM
Hello my friend, I love how your sonnet explores themes of love, renewal, and the cyclical nature of life, using vivid imagery and nature-based metaphors to convey deep emotional connections
Rose  Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 11:32 AM
You have the most analytical mind and the most tender heart, thank you for sharing your thoughts , I'm honored
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 6:54 AM
- A warm and beautiful poem, Vie Rose :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs
Rose  Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Thank you Anne, so nice to hear from you, sending love and friendship ties your way today :)
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