Like A Soft Caress On The Skin, Filled With Enchanting Sin


Come to me like a wild horse unbridled longing for the river 
like a morning prayer on the heart wanting nothing more 
Come to me with pining like a widow waiting for her love 
like a soldier in the trenches, begging for cease fire ...

Come to me like a dove gliding over peaceful waters 
like the otter and the kelp in a symbiotic drift 
Come to me like stars of night shining with accord 
like the morning sun at dawn, rising still on you 

Come to me like a morning cup of coffee freshly brewed 
like a sleeping soul awakened by dreams of yesterday 
Come to me like the diner bell exhaling all your waits 
like a soft caress on the skin filled with enchanting sin  

                            come to me lover with your loving touch, 
                             for I love you, so much !
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Buhagiar Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 1:58 AM
Could such love ever die? Very romantic.
Rose  Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 8:13 AM
no when it is real it never dies, not even beyond the grave dear Victor :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 2:41 PM
Great comparisons for desire. Very creative lines penned. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Rose  Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 8:13 AM
Thank you for stopping by dear Sara
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 3:12 PM
Hello Mystic rose, Rose, i just read this poem. i find it very romantic. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 9:49 AM
Hello Mystic rose, Rose, Your welcome. i enjoyed to read it. Hugs. /Darlene/
Rose  Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 5:30 AM
Thankyou dear Darlene for reading my poem,
Rodgers Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:28 AM
Dearest Rose, your poem surges with untamed images a vivid invocation, wild horse to river, dove to tranquil waters. I feel the pain and tenderness in every line, the longing that ripples like dawn’s first light. Your words are both invocation and hug, a symphony of desire and peace. I loved to gallop and glide, unbridled and luminous, through your verse. Spring Blessings, My Dear Rose, Daniel
Rose  Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Thankyou Daniel, your always a welcome sight
Parker Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 5:04 AM
Such passion, dear poet, like the whisper from a midnight;s sigh...
Rose  Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Thank you Frederic, coming from the romance guy himself, its an honor.
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