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I Yesterday, I can never get back- and I have to find the strength when days are black. When a dark shadow comes I pray, going inner like a red folded rose; where grief has froze; and gone into the light, never forgotten and always in my heart, I ask courage to not depart. And I sit all alone at night, where imagination takes flight; and I write. II Tranquility, in a tempest storm- I force myself to find peace and words form, I gather up and harvest my serenity; and from my bleeding pen drips my thoughts with a heart in knots. Oh, will I take a chance, now, my love is on a distant shore? Will I find a man with valour? He is misty in my dream trance, but I am ready to accept romance; at a glance. III Surrender, I tell myself with tears- even when I hesitate with deep fears I remind myself life is full of splendor, as I look out from my petals crimson red. Life is but a thread, so difficult yet full of charm and grace. Will I find a man who gives affection, or will I face rejection? Yes, I can almost see his face, with love we will embrace; and sadness erase. _____________________ April 9, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/'Like A Red Folded Rose' Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1011-621-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Ten Words sponsor, Joseph May Third Place _______________________ 36 lines (12 x 3) Rhyme pattern - abbaccdeddd x 3 Ten required words:(in order used) yesterday, shadow, forgotten, tempest, harvest, shore, misty, crimson, grace, love

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Date: 4/24/2018 7:28:00 AM
...and, no surprise, place it did. Well done, Constance! Viv x
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Date: 4/24/2018 1:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance.
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Date: 4/23/2018 1:46:00 PM
"Finding peace amid the storm"... Congrats on your win Broken Wings
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Date: 4/15/2018 7:21:00 AM
Constance, I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love the way you formed it and your rhyme pattern. Good luck in the contest. John
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Date: 4/11/2018 1:29:00 AM
Lovely, sad, and hopeful. Beautiful use of the ten words, Constance. Good luck x
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2018 5:15:00 PM
Viv, thank you for the lovely and beautiful. I worked hard on this one, hope it places.
Date: 4/10/2018 6:34:00 PM
Nice
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2018 5:15:00 PM
Kishan, thank you for the nice ~

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