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- Like a Real Ruby -

Red glow;
                                  dressed in brocade
                                  every branch shines
                                  It spreads like a blanket
                                  on a soft bed
                                  In the evening;
                                  the red wings of the sunset

                                  A white canvas,
                                  who gave drink
                                  and nourished the poet
                                  - paints red
                                  A the wind whispers about
                                  frailty
                                  to all that lives
                                  in this world
                                  A symbol of
                                  one's destiny and life
                                  without the need for words
                                  or explanations





                                              29/09/2021
                                      Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Babcock Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Something special about the red in fall as it is not common here and when I see the pinks and reds it looks like a painting. Nature is beautiful. love phyl
Ball Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 7:19 AM
This is lovely Aileen. The Fall is so full of so many colors. It's a silent message that at what seems death is merely sleep and we will reawaken to a wonderful morn. Great stuff here. God Bless, JB
Horn Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 3:19 PM
My Mother's name was Ruby Aileen Yates Horn. Just noticed your name in one of my 2014 poems about Robin Williams. Will never forget him. Just turned 80 years old and am over 8,000 poems.
Rose  Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 2:40 PM
Sometimes there is no need for words when art can express it all so well, Thankyou Sunshine, blessings sent to your heart today :)
Ball Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Lovely Anne-Lise. Exceptional. Love it. God Bless, JB
Goldsmith Avatar
October 2, 2021 at 12:29 PM
A beautiful story/write and picture. The red in the fall is so very pretty. Have a great/blessed day with a hug..................
Mcintosh Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 3:33 PM
Wonderful. I love it. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
Jayasankar Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Such a beautiful imagery created Anne... and the picture too... Hugs... ~ Ani
Skelly Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 8:25 AM
You created a lovely red glow that speaks of destiny...Delice
Gentile Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 6:38 AM
Fragile beauty , gorgeous words! Happy Thursday Anne-Lise !
Daniel Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 1:20 AM
Wonderful imagery in this poem, Sunshine:)
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September 29, 2021 at 11:23 PM
Wonderful poem, so full of images and metaphors.
Cunningham Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 12:27 PM
Love the images you've created Anne, love to see those red glow sunsets this time of year. Tom
Allison Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 10:10 AM
wonderful metaphors and the opening of "Red glow; dressed in brocade every branch shines" is absolutely beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 9:46 AM
What a gorgeous picture you paint with your metaphors, Anne Lise! So beautiful! :)
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