Like a Moth

LIKE A MOTH


Like a moth 
Was I drawn to your 
Passion’s flame,
Once my wings burnt,
Unable was I to fly away 
Thus 
A happy prisoner of your
Love
Since then remain! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
    11 APRIL 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 11, 2013 at 6:50 PM
I love it when men fall like prisoners.. I think i got myself one... and it's been over 3 years... ;-) .. Have yourself a nice one, always & forever* Linda"
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April 11, 2013 at 10:18 AM
You are a very romantic man, Demetrios! :) This is a lovely poem!
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April 11, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Dear Eileen, if someone is inspired it is not difficult to be romantic! Thank you for your comment!
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April 11, 2013 at 5:42 AM
I just love the passion of this tender write my friend! I believe your intricate poem is so wondrous I am in awe of its splendor! I am impressed with this delightful piece, you have put harmony with my soul with this incredible poem, Great Work!!
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April 11, 2013 at 11:48 AM
My dear Russell, Thank you so much for your generous comment!
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