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Like a Fine Mist

Like a fine mist that dissipates in air
    or spools of gossamer thread

  My thoughts go round and round in my head
    'til I awaken and nothing is there

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Kim Rodrigues

August 3, 2022 at 8:17 AM

Beautiful imagery…sound message!

Michael Tor

August 3, 2022 at 8:01 AM

Great analogy Gershon. Thats when you take a few of those smart pills and activate your muse. I need to order some my friend, for I experience, this fine mist. As I get older the mist is becoming more like rain, lol...

Linda Alice Fowler

August 3, 2022 at 7:37 AM

Ah, nothing there but the peace and quiet that nothingness brings. LOL Linda

Shirley Hawkins

August 3, 2022 at 12:10 AM

So true, Gershon. My grey matter is disappearing fast. I don't know how long it will last The grey is fading into white I cannot sleep at night I do not need to awaken Cos most of my brain is already taken!