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Like a Fine Mist

Like a fine mist that dissipates in air or spools of gossamer thread My thoughts go round and round in my head 'til I awaken and nothing is there

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Date: 8/3/2022 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful imagery…sound message!
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Date: 8/3/2022 8:01:00 AM
Great analogy Gershon. Thats when you take a few of those smart pills and activate your muse. I need to order some my friend, for I experience, this fine mist. As I get older the mist is becoming more like rain, lol...
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Date: 8/3/2022 7:37:00 AM
Ah, nothing there but the peace and quiet that nothingness brings. LOL Linda
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Date: 8/3/2022 12:10:00 AM
So true, Gershon. My grey matter is disappearing fast. I don't know how long it will last The grey is fading into white I cannot sleep at night I do not need to awaken Cos most of my brain is already taken!
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Date: 8/2/2022 9:18:00 PM
I love it ! This has been my experience too. Into my Fave.... Gershon!
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