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Like a Chocolate Crust Raspberry Pie

like a chocolate crust pie is the flat-topped ridge of a nearby large mountain Topping mountain pie as far as the eye can see . . . luscious raspberry pink sky high white coalescing clouds trim the twilight’s slice of sky . . . dollops of whipped cream Dec. 12,2022 For the Triple New Charlieku Poetry Contest of Charles Messina 7/5/7, 5/7/7, 7/7/5 (checked by Howmanysyllables.com)

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Date: 1/5/2023 4:01:00 PM
Oh wow--Now I want a piece of pie! Great comparison between hill and pie crust and snow and whipped cream! Yum! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/5/2023 10:41:00 AM
This poem is good enough to eat, Andrea. It's a fave for me. Best wishes.
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Date: 1/5/2023 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your delicious poem.
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Date: 1/5/2023 7:02:00 AM
So well done, Andrea. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations
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Date: 1/5/2023 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 1/4/2023 9:10:00 PM
"like a chocolate crust pie" - Great comparison. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2023 9:02:00 PM
Sumptuous poetry, Andrea, congratulations:)
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Date: 1/4/2023 7:51:00 PM
Andrea, this is such a delicious poem (lol) I love it! Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie :)
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Date: 12/18/2022 6:03:00 PM
Quite cool verse, Andrea Pangie
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Date: 12/16/2022 7:12:00 AM
Makes me want to eat your poem, Andrea ~ sweet
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Date: 12/14/2022 1:38:00 AM
You make my mouth water. Hugs.
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Date: 12/13/2022 2:46:00 AM
- Like the lovely description... best wishes in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 12/12/2022 5:14:00 PM
You've got a top winner here, Andrea! Beautifully described for the contest. Merry Christmas to you and your family! Bob H
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Date: 12/12/2022 4:25:00 PM
I mean I just got really hungry reading that!
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Date: 12/12/2022 3:07:00 PM
Beautifully described and cleverly put together. God Bless. JB
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Date: 12/12/2022 1:44:00 PM
Creative dessert treat, AD. =;o]
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Date: 12/12/2022 11:02:00 AM
Love how you compare those natural wonders to food, very creative Andrea. Tom
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