Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

Like a Chocolate Crust Raspberry Pie

like a chocolate crust pie
is the flat-topped ridge
of a nearby large mountain

Topping mountain pie
as far as the eye can see . . .
luscious raspberry pink sky

high white coalescing clouds
trim the twilight’s slice of sky . . .
dollops of whipped cream

Dec. 12,2022
For the Triple New Charlieku Poetry Contest of Charles Messina
7/5/7, 5/7/7,  7/7/5 (checked by Howmanysyllables.com)

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Ann Peck January 5, 2023 at 4:01 PM Oh wow--Now I want a piece of pie! Great comparison between hill and pie crust and snow and whipped cream! Yum! Congratulations!

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 5, 2023 at 10:41 AM This poem is good enough to eat, Andrea. It's a fave for me. Best wishes.

W J Clarke January 5, 2023 at 10:38 AM Congratulations on your delicious poem.

Sotto Poet January 5, 2023 at 7:02 AM So well done, Andrea. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations

Sara Kendrick January 5, 2023 at 3:53 AM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex January 4, 2023 at 9:10 PM "like a chocolate crust pie" - Great comparison. Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel January 4, 2023 at 9:02 PM Sumptuous poetry, Andrea, congratulations:)

Charles Messina January 4, 2023 at 7:51 PM Andrea, this is such a delicious poem (lol) I love it! Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie :)

Panagiota Romios December 18, 2022 at 6:03 PM Quite cool verse, Andrea Pangie

Line Gauthier December 16, 2022 at 7:12 AM Makes me want to eat your poem, Andrea ~ sweet

Victor Buhagiar December 14, 2022 at 1:38 AM You make my mouth water. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2022 at 2:46 AM - Like the lovely description... best wishes in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs

Robert L. Hinshaw December 12, 2022 at 5:14 PM You've got a top winner here, Andrea! Beautifully described for the contest. Merry Christmas to you and your family! Bob H

Miranda Hawley December 12, 2022 at 4:25 PM I mean I just got really hungry reading that!

Judy Ball December 12, 2022 at 3:07 PM Beautifully described and cleverly put together. God Bless. JB

Arlo Parker December 12, 2022 at 1:44 PM Creative dessert treat, AD. =;o]

Tom Cunningham December 12, 2022 at 11:02 AM Love how you compare those natural wonders to food, very creative Andrea. Tom