Richard Lamoureux Poet Couplet

Like a Child

When I said what I said I felt justified
I thought surely that God would be on my side
Quoting from scripture I relied on the word
A book filled with love that my heart somehow blurred

I picked up his gift, turned it into a stick
Not following God's lead I made my own pick
Instead I chose to read with encumbered mind
My eyes were wide open, still my soul was blind

Yet within his word my mind would be set free
I learned those other people were just like me
None of us perfect we all have our flaws
We all need acceptance we're not just some cause

Loving each person one moment at a time
When I am not judging, I witness them shine
Each person is perfect in their special way
Accepting like a child I learn how to play

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 28, 2014 at 2:01 PM smashing write Richard xx Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2014 at 6:14 PM Thanks Mandy.

Carol Eastman March 28, 2014 at 9:00 AM Ahhh... Loved the message! Richard Lamoureux March 28, 2014 at 9:30 AM Thanks Carol

Lucilla Carrillo March 24, 2014 at 3:32 AM This is just great. I just loved it. Some people never learn. They spend their lives judging others, when we don't have that right. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Richard Lamoureux March 24, 2014 at 8:48 AM Thanks again Lucilla

Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:25 AM A golden poem this is my dear friend Richard. Loving it so much. I'm so glad i passed by here and read one of your precious gems. I'll be back soon. TYSM and more blessings! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora Richard Lamoureux March 24, 2014 at 8:50 AM Thanks so much Leonora. Hugs to you as well.

Scott Thirtyseven March 23, 2014 at 4:18 PM What a fantastic ending, to a great poem. If only we could have a child's acceptance. Richard Lamoureux March 24, 2014 at 8:52 AM That is so true. Thanks Scott.

Andrea Dietrich March 23, 2014 at 11:11 AM great message in this poem. Too much judging in the world and not enough understanding and tolerance. Well done. Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2014 at 12:39 PM Thanks Andrea.

Joyce Johnson March 23, 2014 at 10:16 AM So many of us take part of God's message and treat it as the whole. We just need to keep learning. This poem shows the way. Great message. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Love, Joyce Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2014 at 10:17 AM My pleasure Joyce.

Shadow Hamilton March 23, 2014 at 6:50 AM acceptance without judgement Rick that is what is needed great pen hugs Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2014 at 8:04 AM Thanks, it seems this is one of the more difficult tasks for us humans.

Donna Jones March 22, 2014 at 10:12 PM Love it Richard..personally I think judging is one of the worst..great message....thanks... Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2014 at 12:40 AM Thanks Donna, I'm pleased we agree.

Monterey Sirak March 22, 2014 at 7:47 AM A beautiful compelling way to tell everyone to simply love each other. Richard Lamoureux March 22, 2014 at 8:10 AM Good morning Monterey, hugs Rick.

Yanny Widjanarko March 21, 2014 at 9:53 PM Good evening Rick :D wishing you a great day as a great piece that you offered through your beautiful Poe here :) hug, Yanny Yanny Widjanarko March 22, 2014 at 8:16 PM Yeap enjoying my new experience as a mom :p hehehe Richard Lamoureux March 22, 2014 at 8:15 AM Hello Sunshine, how are you enjoying motherhood?

Toquyen Harrell March 21, 2014 at 9:25 PM I like it, Rick. When we accept ourselves we can accept others - flaws and all. We often judge others with the measure we judge ourselves. I enjoyed this :) Have a great weekend! Richard Lamoureux March 22, 2014 at 8:22 AM Jesus did command us to Love our Neighbors as ourself. I hope you have a great weekend as well.

Teresa Godwin March 21, 2014 at 8:21 PM "Loving each person one moment at a time" oh i love this. That is how it has to be. How often I forget. Sweet and humble position. What a gift. BLessings, ~Teresa Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2014 at 8:40 PM Thanks Teresa, what a thoughtful response.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2014 at 1:59 PM - Love especially how you end it with your line: "Accepting as a child I learn how to play" - The entire life .... no matter how old .... we learn!! - Skillfully written - a pleasure to read. - I wish you a enjoyable weekend, Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2014 at 2:58 PM Thanks Anne Lise as always your thoughts are appreciated.

Tim Smith March 21, 2014 at 1:58 PM I like the line "Each person is perfect in their special way"...so true Richard Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2014 at 8:41 PM It is very true based on my experience over the years. You sir are a fine example. Thanks for the kind response.

Eileen Manassian March 21, 2014 at 1:43 PM :-) One of my fav quotes: Don't judge me because I sin differently than you do. Powerful write. Yes...using scripture as a reprooving stick hurts. Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2014 at 2:59 PM I like it! Interesting way to think of it. Hugs Rick,

Kim Merryman March 21, 2014 at 12:48 PM Love this, Richard! The third stanza really speaks to me. Great write! Love, Kim Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2014 at 3:00 PM Thanks Kim.;0)

Aiyah Torres March 21, 2014 at 10:42 AM so inspiring, Rick!!! ...well done.. :)) ( nice new avatar..looks so young!! ^_6) ..hugs...^__^ Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2014 at 3:01 PM Thanks, I feel young. This was while I was on vacation so Probably I am more relaxed *lol*

Jan Allison March 21, 2014 at 9:41 AM Beautifully written uplifting poem Richard. I especially loved the final verse. Jan xxxxx Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2014 at 9:43 AM Thanks Jan, I appreciate you being the first to comment. Hugs Rick.