Like a Boat

Everytime I see the sun shine, 
I feel like a boat in the middle of the ocean.
Her glorious rays freely strikes my eyes, 
yet, her heart seems so far. 

I am like a prisoner in a prison without walls,
for, I know that I am free, yet restrained, 
bound by the shackles of uncertainty;
blown by the wind from every direction. 

Should I go front or go back,
Should I go left or go right? 
Like a sparrow caught in the middle of a hurricane,
I sail through path so devious and uncertain. 

But the hope of tomorrow stirs the courage in my soul,
and the promise of victory makes me feel like a champion. 
Whether wounded or bleeding, I must fight, for I'm alive. 
I must sail this boat hard to reach my shore. 

February 13, 2023 

I Felt Like Poetry Contest (2nd place) 
Sponsored by: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Messina Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 3:46 AM
This is AWESOME, Roger. Don't ever let the sail down, my friend. "Keep writing" Superb! Congratulations on your win! Charlie
Roger  Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:54 AM
Thank you very much... How I wish I could see some of the fruits of my efforts in the shelves while I still can sail... I have not much time left for sailing...
Alex Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 8:29 PM
"I am like a prisoner in a prison without walls" - very beautiful comparison. A beautifully written poem. Congratulations!
Roger  Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 10:38 PM
Thank you very much... One could be free yet still imprisoned...
Agustin Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, Kabayan! God bless you.
Roger  Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 10:32 PM
Thank you very much Kabayan... God bless too...
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