Like a Bevy of Swallows

Like a bevy of swallows released from a fountain
    the pageantry of a balloon race set in the mountains

  A throng of graduates hurling blue caps in the air 
    ~ so, too, passion's first kiss in a fairy-tale affair
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Boles Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 2:58 PM
A very meaningful description of the multiple facets and positive faces of life. This poem sparkles and ignites the imagination, Gershon!...ab
Wolf Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 8:05 PM
Thank you for the encouragement, Anselmo! ~ Gershon
Sands Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Great one Gershon! Sweet :)
Wolf Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi! Light and Illumination! ~gw
Gentile Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 6:20 AM
GW, your romantic side is quote thrilling and I can feel the excitement as I read your words! I love this and the feelling that it gives me!! Well done sir and happy Saturday!!
Wolf Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 8:28 PM
Mike, my romantic side pales in comparison to yours, truth be told... Looking forward to your next poignant oubturst of passionate poesy! ~ Romeo has nuttin' to worry about from me
Mccann Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 2:20 AM
Wow, that suddenly went air-borne! Elizabeth
Wolf Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 8:30 PM
I may become a 'sky-writer!' Thanks, Elizabeth
Goldsmith Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 11:33 AM
A wonderful write. Enjoy your memories and day writing away............
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 1:22 AM
Love this Gershon, joyful reflections!
Wolf Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Trying my best is all, BJ. Thank you!
Miller Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 12:47 AM
Lovely poem Gershon
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January 5, 2023 at 10:42 PM
Lovely words Gershon! Im surprised you can remember that far back hehe!! Debx
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