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Like a Banyan Tree

Like a Banyan Tree, my roots (seeking rebirth), from eldest, outstretched limbs, descend to a heartening earth. Like a Banyan Tree on hilltop with grand stance, love from embossed gold earth and sky, shall help my soul's expanse. Spirit rustles arches of my highest leaves. Life flows through my core, my dawns, my days, my eves. 6/21/15

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Date: 5/19/2020 3:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. The Banyan Tree is a beautiful tree and so is your story/poem. Enjoy your win and day..........
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Rhonda, so beautiful. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/18/2015 6:12:00 PM
Hey Rhonda, loved this one! Awesome last stanza - this little poem is a gem...
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Date: 7/16/2015 8:35:00 PM
Fantastic imagery! Congrats on your win, Rhonda! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/15/2015 9:01:00 AM
Love this one, congrats!
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:41:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:10:00 PM
Beautiful ... congrats !
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Date: 7/14/2015 9:12:00 PM
The metaphors, imagery and rhyme are all so beautiful in this poem. I enjoyed it very much, Rhonda! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 6/24/2015 11:31:00 PM
that last stanza is simply outstanding. The sounds and the feelings it evokes. marvelous, rhonda. (I may be gone a whole week with no internet soon). but hopefully my in laws have internet where I am going!!
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Date: 6/23/2015 2:39:00 AM
Excellent write Rhonda your piece is so intrigue........A.M.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/24/2015 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Afolabi for your kindness!
Date: 6/22/2015 5:50:00 PM
Rhonda a wonderful write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, three grey cats
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/24/2015 10:03:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and kind words :))
Date: 6/22/2015 2:03:00 PM
I am ready to buy your book if you have one Rhonda?. I love the way you write. This is another wonderful poem!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/24/2015 10:02:00 PM
Thanks, Connie...your comment made my week! I don't have a book, but maybe one day, I'll do one. It's hard to find the time now with two young boys. I appreciate your encouraging comments.
Date: 6/22/2015 5:08:00 AM
I can feel the heartbeat of your poem. Your soul expands with every line. A 7. ~~Darlene
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/24/2015 9:56:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. I saw a beautiful Banyan Tree last Sunday and became inspired. I appreciate the kind comments!
Date: 6/22/2015 5:03:00 AM
Vibrant verse, pulsing with life. Love it, Rhonda. Viv x
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/24/2015 9:54:00 PM
Thanks, Viv...your kind words are greatly appreciated!
Date: 6/22/2015 3:53:00 AM
- Rhonda a lovely poem, great rhyming and metaphor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/24/2015 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise! I always appreciate your kind words.
Date: 6/22/2015 2:26:00 AM
Beautiful imagery used, to bring this poem to life... loved it.
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