Lights Come On

When my spouse gets into this décor thing,
you might as well forget about dinner.
Our backyard lighting is on the upswing
meanwhile, I’m getting thinner and thinner.

August 23, 2021

Sponsor	L MILTON HANKINS
Contest Name	YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE, NO. 2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Agustin Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 1:43 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and the chuckle it creates. God bless you.
Poteet Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Thanks, Beata, appreciate the read. Hungry husband needs to go to Hardee's and pick up some supper for both of them.
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 3:25 PM
I would never let it interfere with MY dinner. hahaha. GREAT job, and congrats
Poteet Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 7:11 PM
It has happened to me when writing. Hunger for food is replaced by hunger for that next line, rhyme, or other device. Too preoccupied to eat - unfortunately it doesn't happen often enough to affect my poundage. THanks Andrea.
Kauffman Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 11:07 AM
So fun, Reason. Congratulations and thanks for the diet tip! Time to do some remodeling!
Poteet Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 7:13 PM
Glad you found a use for these four lines past just another read...lol best of luck or make that best of "look". Thanks, Sam.
Alex Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
Poteet Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 7:13 PM
Thank you, poet Christuraj. I welcome your reply.
Fenn Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:05 PM
Funny! Good luck in the contest!
Poteet Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 7:14 PM
Thanks Jennifer. A month almost and your best wishes come to fruition. Double thanks.
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