Lightning Crashes

Lightning crashes The rolling thunder Passes the wind Russell Sivey

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/16/2012 9:37:00 AM

I am thinking this one is funny but I am sure that you did not mean for that to be the interpertation..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2012 8:53:00 AM

Love this Russell, awesome imagery :) hope you weekend is a great one my friend, luv Wilma

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/16/2012 4:54:00 AM

like this Russell, so real!!!

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 9/16/2012 4:49:00 AM

Excellent haiku! I adore this genre. You can read mine, too! Can I post it on my poetry site fryktorein.blogspot.gr, please? It's got Greek and English poems,too. You can post your own comments!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/15/2012 9:32:00 PM

I do love the haiku ;}