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Lightning and Thunder

Lightning and thunder,
Vortex swirls above my head.
I cannot hear you.

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James Fraser

September 8, 2014 at 2:58 PM

Yep, such conditions can leave the listener struggling to hear, James :)

John Rey Canon

September 8, 2014 at 8:54 PM

That I long for someone's voice, a familiar one, from the deafening crowd.

Faye Gibson

August 27, 2014 at 8:45 PM

Congrats, John, for your win.

John Rey Canon

August 27, 2014 at 8:53 PM

Thank you ma'am

Poet Destroyer A

August 26, 2014 at 7:59 PM

thank you John, for the reply

Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2014 at 5:26 PM

This does have that haiku feel to it!! Congrats for your win.

John Rey Canon

August 26, 2014 at 7:47 PM

thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

August 24, 2014 at 3:38 PM

John, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

John Rey Canon

August 26, 2014 at 7:48 PM

thank you ma'am. It's satisfying.