Lightning

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grey ominous clouds
colliding with a loud boom ~
a bolt of lightning


Written 8th May 2020.

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/29/2020 5:13:00 PM

you can have that bolt of lighting.. make it stay away from me. lovely write, Tom. great imagery …:) eve

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/29/2020 5:28:00 PM

Thank you Eve, when I was in Florida I saw some amazing electrical storms on all their glory, I know many are fearful of them. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Funom Makama

Date: 5/19/2020 6:08:00 AM

Scary but powerful; fascinating but devastating. Nature in 3D where its madness and ecstasy showcase at the same time. Good work Tom Cunningham

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/19/2020 6:46:00 AM

Thank you Funom, glad you liked it. Love to see a good storm, preferably from inside. Tom

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/10/2020 11:54:00 AM

I guess I oberseved this site yesterday... I love lightning.. Beautiful imagery. Regards

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/10/2020 12:02:00 PM

Thank you Paghunda, I agree, it's awesome to watch. Tom

Silent One

Date: 5/10/2020 10:58:00 AM

Striking imagery!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/10/2020 11:26:00 AM

Thank you S. O., I'm not a storm chaser but a lightning storm fascinates me. Tom

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/9/2020 2:02:00 PM

Hi Tom: Great haiku! HOPE YOU ARE BEARING WITH THE CRISIS!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/9/2020 3:35:00 PM

Thanks Ralph, bearing up OK, hope you are too. Stay safe Tom

Ann Gilmour

Date: 5/9/2020 8:21:00 AM

You have captured it perfectly Tom, can almost hear that boom! Good luck my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx ps very hot here today, hope you are experiencing the same...

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/9/2020 9:55:00 AM

Thanks Ann, was very hot here in Worcs earlier but greyed over now, looks like rain. Hope you're well. Tom